Portfolio for Writing III

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Student ID: 07109
(last five digits of
your student no.)

Portfolio for Writing III,
Section 1a [or] 1c
(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below[.])

1.1. Showcase	Short titles [+ links]	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)	¶	W	C	L	P	M
Self-introduction 08.04.20 (250 words)	Placement essay	2008.04.09	9	292	0	0	0	0
Movie review 08.05.04 (300 words)	MR 1-01: Shrek	2008.05.07	6	153	0	0	1	0
University life 08.05.18	My Wonderful University Life	2008.05.16	5	500	7	0	1	0
Another review 08.06.01	Writing essay ★Restaurant Joyfull★	2008.05.30	8	814	3	1	9	0
Language learning history 08.06.15	Writing Essay: Personal Language Learning History	2008.06.15	9	601	0	0	6	0
5th essay (pending) TBA	My Presentation	2008.07.09
Totals	---	---

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media embedded

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• Writing essay ★Restaurant Joyfull★ Because I pasted a lot of graphics, so people can enjoy seeing my essay. Also because I wrote so much information on this essay, so people can know much about Joyfull. And the layout was neat to me.

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*	Best Reviews 1.1 (2008): Best [Post] Title	2008.06.04	26
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	Heart leaf☆	2008.06.27	67
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	★The Island Pig Nemacystus Decipiens' Sausage★	2008.06.27	44
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd)	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments*[*]
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	My Wonderful University Life	2008.05.16	125
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2008.05.21	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	140
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*	★The Island Pig Nemacystus Decipiens' Sausage★	2008.06.27	44
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2008.06.27	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	58

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

• header...
  

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

It's good for me to be given different comments. For I can know a variety of others' opinions all over the world. I'm happy to be given comments, and I look forward to checking all comments.

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
1-01	Victorian Adventure	08.04.24	70	0
1-02	Castle Adventure	08.04.24	72	0
1-03	Viking Adventure	08.04.24	70	0
1-04	Submarine Adventure	08.04.24	72	0
1-05	Egyptian Adventure	08.04.25	93	0
1-06	Roman Adventure	08.04.28	96	0
1-07	Land of the Dinosaurs	08.04.28	124	0
1-08	Kipper and the Giant	08.04.29	92	0
1-09	Rotten Apples	08.05.02	313	0
1-10	Chinese Adventure	08.05.05	305	0
1-11	The Jigsaw Puzzle	08.05.13	147	0
1-12	The Motorway	08.05.14	507	0
1-13	Maggie Magpie's Pie	08.06.07	373	0
1-14	Wendy Worm's Adventure	08.06.07	424	0
1-15
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1-18
1-19
1-20
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Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Remove these square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog have an archive?	○
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	○
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	○
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	○
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	○
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	○
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	○
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)		○
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	○
"movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)	○
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	○
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?　 _５_ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. books (14) foods (14) graphics (45) links (4) medias (1) movies (2) music (2) p.p.essays (4) perfumes (5) reviews (17) stars (4) Typing H.W.s (13) Typing Tests (1)	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?	○
Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?	○
How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics? __36_ posts including pictures or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?	○
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?* __1_ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?	○
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? __1_ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here: ...★Prisoner Of Love★ ... ...	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. graphics...I have pasted a lot of pictures on my blog posts. Because of this, you can enjoy seeing my blog posts more.


2. verdana...I have done formatting the almost all letters to font of verdana. Because of this, it's easy for you to see each posts.


3. layout...I have changed the leyout about once a week. Because of this, you don't lose interests in my blog.

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

• ...I enjoyed my blog writing. I had felt tired of doing so at the start, but I got to be fun while I did them hard. Though there was much time when it was difficult for me to solve problems, I did my best as possible. I’m looking forward to the Writing class in the second semester.

6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

• ...You had better enjoy this class. You mustn’t think that you have to do things, but that you can do things in this chance. You had better update your blog almost every day. If you update five times a week, I think, you may get into habit of knocking off your works.

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08).


2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.
   


3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)
   

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