2008年11月19日水曜日

My Favorite Essay

I nominate her essay. This is it.

MR 2-01: Important Things That She Taught Me

Firstly she changes color of fonts from basic colors to bright colors, so I can know which points are important. Secondly she pastes three pictures about the movie, so I can enjoy reading her essay very much. Thirdly she gives the essay the title "Important Things That She Taught Me", which is really catchy, so I have my interest aroused before reading. Fourthly she divides the essay into paragraphs, so I know the way it develops. Lastly she states her own opinion in the last paragraph, so she can put a question to a vote about her opinion naturally.

Because of five reasons I nominate her essay for my favorite essay.

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